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Timformation
05-11-2004, 11:48 PM
9/11 and the subsequent war in Iraq has generated a ton of rage and confusion (just look at this forum). If anyone's created any pieces that touch on these issues, feel free to post. Here's what I came up with:

A Short History of America

I

Is was not so much really
sooty tongues shoving cages of wood
across umbilical seas
charcoal
teeth swaying in the closing jaw of the ocean

Stinging the bitter
taste of an alien shore
hurling smoke and thunder
against dying spears
cluttering the path to sun and moon
through the breasts of tyrants

Who respond
sending tin soldiers up the little red streams
rusting in the mother pool

Until the lyric twang of stretched bows
becomes a distant echoing in the ears of the herd

(sliding silently over snake grasses)

towards the shimmering horizon

Ocean-sound trapped in the conch
frozen in sap on limestone tombs

The first world

II

The ancient tongues are dead

Sweat washing clean the blood-brushed plains
clearing shriveled kidneys from the earch
peeling back stones like fingernails

trailing creaking geletin fragments

Gathering th jagged bones
of drowned mothers
turning back into caved rock

The lark's cry dying
in brutal plains of morning mist
Spiders sparring in empty chambers

Consumed by the harvest
whose implements are the undead spoor
of monsters
raping the well-springs of fertility
that lay shackled by twisted hooked loops
of haywire and leather
territory to be entered furtively
borrowed and owned
but never tended

Rails leave tracks in the virgin snow
trailing into the scattered campfire ashes of forests
dodging heavy graves
threatening to spill the uneasy dead upon the sparse fringe

Whim becoming substance

III

Barbed fishhooks have transfixed my eyes
tugging them to leer at gas-flares, at
wooden pyres and trash middens
every sense panicking at shreiking colours
gaudy sounds
putrid textures

Automobiles graze on crumbling pavement
where horses did before them
and dinosaurs before them

Cities sprawl their splayed craniums of bedlam
through cavernous inches of space
the streets repaving themselves with greasy
murders
nacked theft and sticky rapes

The common ground exists between legs

(hurling volleys of spite across the neutral tables)

Of buses, trains, cafes

The curators and custodians
insane with skill
wrap oceans in a wilderness of wire

Compressing it to the size of a tennis ball

Nations are restaurants that
flash once in headlights
and are gone

(the phone is disconnected)

Out chasing the survivors of enforced life
back to the cold refuge

of caves

m0loch
05-11-2004, 11:54 PM
Does it have to be organized poetry or writing or can it be more Kurt Cobain "Journals" style?

Timformation
06-11-2004, 12:05 AM
Does it have to be organized poetry or writing or can it be more Kurt Cobain "Journals" style?

Submit anything you want! I tend to write formal, heavily stylized pieces, but that's just my personal style. There are no structural "rules" for this forum, so feel free.

Journals, stream of consciousness, total and utter chaos - its all good.

minorproblem
06-11-2004, 12:23 AM
This just about sums up my feelings I like to express myself with pictures becuase i am special

minorproblem
06-11-2004, 12:46 AM
The swirl of colours represent the swirl of confussion as an allied soldier dies and in those last moments realises "for what cause?"

m0loch
06-11-2004, 04:58 PM
Here's a letter I wrote to my Legislators on...Sep 17th 2001. I received only one response. It was a form letter "thank you for your interest in your gubment blah blah blah die blasphemer" or something along those lines.

Dear Sir,

In the coming days and weeks your wisdom and good judgment will be counted on by all Nebraskans and Americans. The decisions that you and your colleagues make will have a monumental impact on Nebraska, The United States of America and the world.

My concern is that you don't compromise the rights guaranteed to those you represent in order to defend those same rights. If the basic rights granted to me and my fellow Americans, such as firearm ownership and the protection against unreasonable search and seizure, by the U.S. Constitution are compromised then I feel it won't have been worth defending. This is, afterall, what America was founded on.

These basic rights should not be compromised in the name of security or safety. Issues mentioned in the news such as wire taps and other surveillance methods have their place, but please don't give law enforcement and other government agencies free reign to use these tools at their sole discretion. Conveniences that I will loose I can do without but I cannot do without my basic rights.

I thank you for your time and I wish you luck in the trying times ahead. You are my voice and I am counting on you to act in my best interests.

Regards,

m0loch



I was trying to be polite. It doesn't suit me well

m0loch
06-11-2004, 05:13 PM
The first time I flew after the Sep 11th attacks I had a copy of Kurt Cobain's "Journals" with me. It inspired me greatly. Here are some unorganized ramblings that I wrote during that flight and during the opening days of the war in Iraq. Oh..the name that I gave my journal is "Duct Tape and Plastic Sheeting or How to Secure a Nation By Tom Ridge"

3-18-03 I added a new word to my vocabulary today. Capitulation. Why do I know this? What circumstances led to this knowledge?

3-23-03

I am contemplating the overwhelming responsibility of military leadership and can't help but think that a Major General could come up with something far more profound than chanting "Are we ready?!?" like some eigth grade cheerleader. Patton is remembered for his words. Hopefully "Are we ready?!?" won't become the motivational speech for a generation. As I well know events during war do much to define a person.

No shit, this MG so and so was prancing around in a hangar chanting this crap

3-25-03
The largest, most succesfull reality series has been being aired for 6(??) days now. Brought to you by no other than Dodge Trucks!!! I'm waiting for direct corporate sponsorship of the war. "Nike's battle for Basra" "Budweiser Scud Defense Team" "Raid Chemical Defense Drill" 24/7 coverage. Who will be voted off first? Saddam? W? Tony Blair? Gen. Franks?

Embedded journalists. Now that EXUDES confidence.

"Iraqi Freedom Vet, Will work for food" <---- I need to illustrate this somehow.

"Camp Nike"
"The Official Flame Broiled Burger of the 101st Airborne"
"Is It In You?" <--- as a soldier oozes camo gatorade sweat


There's more, lots more..Any takers?