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straightchaos
29-11-2005, 04:59 AM
Once upon a time, there were three social turds
A black boy, the school slut, and a high school nerd
The first was picked on for his color of skin
The second got addicted to a deadly sin
The third was the saddest in all that it was
Shunned for making "A"s and his social flaws

From last to first, I'll tell of these kids
How their lives evolved and all that they did

The third grew up and into a good life
Fortune 500 company and a centerfold wife
Took what he learned - learned to endure
Now he pays motherfuckers to bag his manure

Getting picked on in school didn't ruin his life
He cut right threw it like a razor blade knife

The second girl, who just loved to fuck
Got caught at a party in the back of a truck
She was doing 5 guys all at the same time
Back at school it turned into a crime
She was talked about and treated like shit
Two weeks later, she decided to split
Went out west, and became a porn star
She liked it so much, her career, it went far
Now the kids back at school they watch all her movies
Now they think she's sexy, they think she's groovy

Getting picked on in school didn't ruin her life
She cut right threw it like a razor blade knife

Now finally we come to that little black boy
Who got picked on in school and used as a toy
He grew up bitter and full of such hate
His mind got stuck at the age of eight
Today he has nothing, but darkness inside
A festering boil, where evil resides
He writes dark poetry thats morbid and grim
Wanting everyone to feel sorry for him
But the pity is there for his waning mind health
Not what others had done, but done to himself
Grow up you fool, and get over yourself
Box up that hate, and go find love's wealth

Getting picked on in school, he let it ruin his life
It cut right threw him like a razor blade knife

berserk
29-11-2005, 03:02 PM
ok... "threw" in the 2nd line if the refrain should be "through"

straightchaos
30-11-2005, 06:14 AM
Thanks for the spelling correction.:8:

eeefreak
30-11-2005, 07:06 AM
so the message is "It's ok to discriminate against black people because it's their own fault if they take offense?"

Hairyman
30-11-2005, 08:03 AM
No, it's get on with your life and don't waste all your time whinging about being hard done by.

The Avatar
30-11-2005, 08:49 AM
Useless without pics of the slut :D

straightchaos
30-11-2005, 09:22 PM
Useless without pics of the slut :D

:lol:

Bifrost
10-12-2005, 02:57 PM
It's taken me a while to get back into the forum here for anything except flame scanning.

I like this one. It's got meaning which is difficult to write into poetry. I mean anyone can write an abstract piece which means a lot to them or someone close to them, but to put meaning forward to most people in a poetic form is difficult. +rep.

Fuzzy Dice
10-12-2005, 07:24 PM
i agree with bifrost, and I also like the fact that you've ignored the poetic trend against rhyming. The rhyme winds the story together and shows off your talent for wordplay.